When the pain descends to the inner depths and reaches to attach to the organ we call heart,
It’s not long after, like an adrenaline rush, it shifts with uneasiness, ready to erupt like a volcano.
The remnants of its blazes, reaches like a knot in the throat, trying to swallow it quickly before they appear on the outer surface of my body.
The eyes, I aim have been untouched and unsensed from the inner turmoils, keeping them dry, and viewing them to make sure they have been unchanged.
No sadness.
No tears.
No Redness.
Until all alone, all gushes forth, pouring out, what I held;
what I call pain.
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Sobia
Image copyrights belong to Esaxil from DeviantArt.com.
Conveying real pain is always a challenge–one you’ve risen to very well here. 🙂
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Thank you Cathleen, I appreciate your lovely and kind feedback. Thank you for stopping by, it’s greatly appreciated.
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your descriptions are so so so vivid!!! like i can feel every word! GREAT job!
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Thank you Rosema, always appreciate your feedback.
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you deserve them, Sobia. 🙂
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Thank you ever so much.
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This is excellent prose!
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Thank you Shane, so happy to hear you liked this piece, thank you for stopping by.
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Very deep and powerful. May the pain not overshadow the light within you.
Thank you for sharing, Keep Smiling.
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Thank you for stopping by and commenting.
Thank you for making me smile, and being you. It’s much appreciated.
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This really hit home. I loved it. Thanks for sharing. It’s beautiful. Just beautiful!
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Thank you, our feelings are mutual it seems.
Our painful moments can be shared with those around us, it helps to unleash the burden we are carrying.
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You’re welcome. I agree. I think so. It helps me to talk with others about hard times, the painful moments. You never know how your moments can help someone else. I’m glad our feelings are mutual.
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Aaww yes very true, therefore keep writing and never give up.
We are walking a rocky path, we need to keep walking regardless of its hardships, the path will eventually become smoother.
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Yes I agree. Thank you. You keep writing too and never give up. 🙂
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Thank you, I’ll keep going hopefully.
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You’re welcome. We both will. I’m sure of it. We both just take one day at a time and move forward. 🙂
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Step by step.
Lately I have felt like giving up writing on my blog but then I just continue as the days come.
Hope you’re okay dear.
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Yep. I know the feeling. I am so glad I decided not to stop. I love my blog now. Just take one day at a time. You are not alone. I’m doing well. I hope you are!
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Aaww I’m glad you are loving blogging. Mostly that you’re happy 👍🏼
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Thank you. It took me a long to figure out how to be happy, but I am. Hope you have a wonderful day!!
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I am happy to hear you are Kath, thank you and you too.
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You’re welcome.
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👍🏼
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Thank you ever so much for your lovely and kind words, I’m ever so grateful .
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You’re welcome.
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A pleasure
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Oh! That hurts! Sobia, you can do wonders with words!
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Thank you dear, words indeed can, thank you so much for stopping by, I truly appreciate your words and support.
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Dark…deep…pain at its rawness.
Geat piece, Sobia!
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Thank you Andrei, such a pleasure to hear from you, I’m so happy to know that you liked it.
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I loved it! Keep it coming! ☺
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Thank you Andrei, you are a star, your encouragement means a lot to me.
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Don’t mention it ☺
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Thanks.
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Your words are mighty, bewitching. Powerful expression, Sobia. Pain stirring inside . Beautiful! ❤
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Thank you Sanket, your words do humble me and at the same time have truly made my day.
I’m glad you loved it and thank you so much for leaving your generous feedback.
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I did? My pleasure. I wish, I always do so. 🙂
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Yes, you sure do, your comments are always rewarding, and encouraging. 👍🏼
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The pain is beautifully expressed in this.
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Reblogged this on Emerging From The Dark Night and commented:
This powerful poem comes deeply from a heart in pain.
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Thank you ever so much, I appreciate the reblog and yes indeed it did.
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Stunning expression of how our hearts feel under the duress of so much unrequited pain. Would you mind if I reblog,.. this is so powerful.
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Thank you ever so much and in deed it is.
Not at all, please feel free to do so.
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Emotional pain.So nise described💔
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Thank you dear.
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Beautiful poem, Sobia.
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Thank you Asha, greatly appreciated especially coming from you, truly humbled by your kind comments.
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Pleasure. 🙂
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👍🏼
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Poignant and so accurate that it hurts
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That’s what pain does to us, you’ll feel it more so if you have experienced it.
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Touché…….
Couldn’t agree more
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Thank you 👍🏼
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Woah!!!! That’s one artistic piece……
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Thank you ever so much, you’re truly so kind with your words.
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It was deep,its a pain to even read about pain in such a thoughtful manner. Beautifully written 👍✌
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Thank you Sundershana, greatly appreciate your kind feedback.
Our emotions are what keeps us human, and keeps on the ground. There’s nothing wrong with feeling sad or crying, it doesn’t even make you weak. It’s how you deal with the situation itself and allowing yourself to grow, reflects your true inner strength.
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Perfectly said. But hard to read.
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Thank you, hard due to the style or the word choice?
Thank you.
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Hard because it brings up feelings of pain…your word choices and style beautifully create how pain feels. And pain is almost impossible to describe.
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Thank you dear, really touched by your kind words, exactly what I need tonight.
Thank you very much.
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