After all this, she said it was time to let go,
I held my breath, clenched my fingers tightly, hoping I had been mistaken and it wasn’t going to be as so.
‘Do you understand’ she whispered; I didn’t, not really, ‘no’.
Where was it that I faltered or took the wrong turn; love was a bliss between us, what was it that made it turn cold.
I hoped she would change her mind, I didn’t mind compromising! ‘I’ll do whatever you want me to, just don’t leave me .. I consoled’!
The eyes they say, never lie, and that’s when I saw it;
the love had died, she nodded in pity and looked so different, so cold ..
And then;
She left;
Without a word.
I knew, I had lost the war,
But I never imagined for it to end, so abruptly, even though ‘ I still had so much to say to her’,
which was left untold.
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I hope you’re doing well. I miss your beautiful writing!
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Thank you Diana, I shall start penning again but I was greatly touched by your beautiful message, you know I really appreciate beautiful people like you so I shall sure be making time to read some of your beautiful posts, starting from tomorrow morning hopefully. Thank you once again.
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You’re utmost welcome. I took a break from blogging and I’m back after 4 months, so I’m trying to see how best I can catch up with some bloggers. I hope to see more of your writing this year. Take care.
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Aawwww I think I took a longer break, I’ll sure pay a visit to catch up on your lovely posts.
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Take your time! 😄💙
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Beautifully narrated. Sad when love is one sided. It cannot last. Though not easy, the best thing is to call it off.
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How good it feels to read your posts again. She left without a word. I knew I had lost the war. Lovely💓
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In life we have to learn unrequited love, by that description … isn’t love. Love being a sharing of emotions, feelings and togetherness like a magnet drawn together. Not a thing that one can experience alone. You described it perfectly.
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Thank you Ellen, it’s a pleasure receiving positive feedback from you. Looking forward to your post today.
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ellenbest24, well said – Simply-Me, your beautiful honest writing has evoked much emotion ❤
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Thank you so much for your lovely words
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Agree !
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So much pain. Your writing is so beautiful. ❤
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Thank you Diana, your comments and feedback means a lot, I appreciate it and I’m happy to know that you liked it.
Thank you. 👍
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You’re utmost welcome! 🙂
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This is so moving and beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us 🙂
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Aaww thank you for reading it. A pleasure to have you here.
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Being left out in the cold is a hard thing… when someone leaves us… It takes us time to really get over it…. but eventually we do… Love your wrting! 🙂
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Yes I agree, sometimes the very thing that upsets us is a reason for new doors of opportunity to open for us to lead us to a better place.
Thank you so much for you’re lovely words. I appreciate it.
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Love this so much it’s very relatable.
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Thank you Moody 👍 I’m glad to hear that you love it . A pleasure to have you here.
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I love your poetry
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Thank you ever so much, that’s quiet a compliment coming from you as you write beautifully.
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The pain and longing of heartbreak. Well time will heal all wounds but those words will remain unsaid. You have painted an emotional picture, Sobia.
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Thank you and indeed with time all wounds heal even though they may leave scars.
Thank you for you’re feedback.
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🙂
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Heart wrenching and that line love was a bliss between us and what was it that made it turn cold; so so favourite line of mine. Its not necessary that we always have HAPPY ENDINGS in stories as well as in life, for me this is my one of the favourite read till date. Wonderful
How are you? Hope you are doing well. Will glad to have you at my site and your words at my latest post. https://sudershana.wordpress.com/2017/09/22/is-that-feeling-really-existfiction/
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Thank you so much, you’re kind words have certainly made my evening and I appreciate it. Thank you Sundershana. I’m doing well thank you and how about yourself.
Yes of course will visit you’re lovely blog for sure.
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Such a thought provoking post. The scenario is so reminiscent of past experiences with girls who I thought was my soulmate but turned out otherwise.
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Thank you Mark, such a pleasure to hear from you. Yes it can be hard and I believe situations like this occur for new doors to open in our lives and help us to move forward.
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I sometimes wonder SM, if just letting go, moving on with our own journey with new doors around every corner, isn’t the best action for everyone concerned? There are those that just need to discover things on their own, in their own pace, healthy or not. 🙂 ❤
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Yes I agree, when one door closes, there’s always others open if we allow them to.
Thank you.
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A beautiful reminder to never hold back…
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Thank you so much, I appreciate you’re kind comments.
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A pleasure always!
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💐 thank you for you’re kindness.
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In the end I found someone who loved me and it all worked out! We seem to always take the short view on life!
Dwight
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I’m glad it worked out wonderfully for you .. sometimes when one door closes, there’s always reasons behind it for a new one to open.
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Been there and done that many years ago! Still like yesterday!!
Dwight
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Yes it hurts when that happens, but it’s always for new doors to open and someone better to walk in to our lives.
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Not all.stories have a happily ever after.
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Yes very true, thank you.
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You are right.
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