Do I ask for too much,
If I’m asking for a little space ..
To exhale the misunderstood feelings I harbor,
To put them at bay.
To simply spend a little time with;
me,
myself
and I.
To know the storms that I create, turmoiling my inner side.
To feel the sand between my fingers and rummage through it like it’s treasure.
To sit in the rain and drown myself, unburdening the thunder and sorrow.
To run on grass or the earth, just with my bare feet;
to feel it’s warmth, it’s cool, calm, collective nature, whilst I run to exhume the heat.
To sit beside a silent shore and dip my feet to sense it,
It’s cold blue surface,
hiding a deeper tide than it actually mirrors.
Do I ask for too much,
when I just want to spend some time,
with the trees, the sea, the sand, the sky, the sun, the birds, the rain, the storm,
or even me.
For they seem to know me,
Understanding my silences with which I speak.
The pauses I take with hesitation, pondering with great length with the words I say,
Do I ask for too much;
when I just want to be me.
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Image taken from Pinterest.
Thank you for visiting.
Feel free to check out my poem too…its on the music our nature offers us..
https://writetoexpress994.wordpress.com/2017/06/09/symphony-of-nature/
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Its really beautiful…lovely piece..the way you have described nature is just mind blowing. These little things like enjoying the rain, walking barefoot on wet grass, sitting on a beach listening to waves…they are a way to achieve inner peace and that’s what we all need to know…beautifully described.
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Understanding my silence with which I speak; wonderful line of this beautiful poetry.
Happy weekend. Will glad to have you at my site too
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Thank you dear Purva. I appreciate your kind words.
You too dear and I sure have stopped by your lovely blog.
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Hello Sinply-me!
Such a pretty piece of writing and no… you certainly are not asking too much 💐🌟
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Thank you Di, welcome to my little place, and awfully sweet of you, thank you for the kind feedback and compliments.
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You are very welcome. Yes, your little place where you can just be you and your tribe will find you. And it seems they really have. You receive so many beautiful comments. Congratulations to you 💐💐
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Thank you Di, and with time you will find this wonderful community too. They are really nice and encouraging and I’m sometimes surprised I receive so many encouraging comments. It’s kind of them and a beautiful thing too. Sometimes that’s where we find motivation from to keep writing.
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I think I already have, thank you Simply-me💐. Yes, every comment is a gift. And so encouraging. Enjoy your weekend 🍃🌱🍂
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Aaww a pleasure to hear, thank you and you too Di.
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You could make this into a song 😀 great content ^^
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Haha sure why not. Thank you.
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No, you do not ask for too much, for how can it be too much to give time to yourself… Be Happy, and continue to embrace the energy and solace of Mother Earth.. For her healing is time spent within Nature For we are One.. ❤
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Thank you ever so much Sue, and beautifully said. It is indeed and it is the best feeling when we do spend quality time with nature.
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❤ xxxx 🙂 thank you.. Enjoy the Peace of today xx
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Thank you so much Sue.
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❤
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Thank you
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Most welcome.
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Meaningful questions. Indeed, peace and nature go hand in hand. A way of experiencing consciousness outside esp sometimes when people and crowd become a metaphor for mind.
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Yes very true and beautifully said. Thank you .
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Pleasure
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Always is to see your comments.
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Beautifully put.
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Nice poem. Beautiful to digest
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I appreciate the lovely feedback. Thank you.
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oh this is such a heartfelt poem. i can feel the tiredness, the sadness, the hint of anger.
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Aaww I’m glad you could Rosema. Always wonderful to hear from you dear.
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aww. always! 😀
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Bless you.
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NO you do not ask too much! In fact, we could all do with a little more me time; especially in nature… So calming and soothing.
Great post, and a wonderful reminder to us all… 🙂
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Aaww thank you ever so much Carolyn.
Yes sometimes it’s great to get away from this busy life, sit and enjoy the calmness of nature and its sounds that relax you. It’s beautiful.
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Very lovely poem!!💗
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This is absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you ever so much Miriam. I appreciate your kind words and feedback.
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Beautiful poetry. You write thoughts and feelings that draws in readers.
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Thank you Jennie, I aim to write as where I connect to hearts. Draw in emotions as that’s when words are tasted and felt.
Thank you dear, your comments mean a lot and I’m humbled by your kindness.
You made my day Jennie, and I appreciate you stopping by.
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You are welcome! 🙂
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A pleasure.
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Reblogged this on Putting My Feet in the Dirt and commented:
Very relatable and beautifully written!
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Thank you ever so much, very sweet of you. I’m grateful for the reblog. Thank you dear for stopping by, a pleasure to hear from you.
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You’re most welcome. Such a great poem, I couldn’t help myself! 😉
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Aaww thank you Jennie, you’re ever so kind. Thank you and I look forward to your story for part 3.
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Can’t wait to share it! 😉
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Thank you ever so much Dear.
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I just spent a few days in nature and your words remind me to seek it out again, I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece!
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Thank you, I’m glad you did, the best get away is spending time with nature, it refreshes, and rejuvenates you.
I’m glad I could encourage you that way, and why not treat yourself.
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This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you Kayla, I’m happy to know that you like it.
It’s my pleasure and thank you for stopping by.
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You don’t ask too much at all 🌹
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Thank you Elaine. Sometimes life’s dramas make you feel as such.
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Great photo and I love being one with nature. 🙂
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Yes it’s beautiful indeed, it revitalises you.
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I’m glad you do as I do too. Nature is calming and rejuvenating.
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Awesome! Nature is the living subconscious. When you spend time with her she speaks to you. 😊
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She does indeed, very well said. It’s indeed soothing to spend quality time with the nature.
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Thank you very much.
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Beautiful. Great choice on the photo. I love it.
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Thank you Kath, I’m glad you do, I’ve tried to impose a calmer feel to it for the readers.
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You’re welcome. Well I think you have. It’s awesome.
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Thank you Kath, you’re such a sweetheart. It’s always a pleasure to hear from, always. You certainly make my day.
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You’re most welcome. I’m glad.
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Thank you Kath. 💐
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You’re most welcome.
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Thank you dear.
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You’re welcome.
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As always.
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🙂 Smiling!!
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Always a pleasure to know you are happy.
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Thank you. I want you to be happy too. 🙂
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So beautifully written, and you’ve really breathed life in to the feelings and nature of the piece. “For they seem to know me,Understanding my silences with which I speak” – there really is something peaceful about nature, a connection that can be so calming and refreshing. x
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Thank you ever so much dear, I’ve tried my best to incorporate the feel and sense of nature. Yes there is, nature is a friend of ours, which only helps us, but unfortunately in our busy lives we overlook it and don’t have time for it.
I appreciate your lovely feedback.
Thank you ever so much for stopping by, it’s greatly appreciated. 💐
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Ah such a nice image you have painted with your words. I share your passion to seek unison with nature. A quest to be simply be me 🙂
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That’s beautiful to hear, nature is therapeutic if we allow ourselves to spend some quality time with it.
It even helps to calm you and even taking out the negative feelings or sadness and replacing it with peace and calmness.
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Exactly!! Nature is the greatest healer 🙂
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It is indeed, we just need to give some time to it from our busy lives.
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you ever so much. I’m happy that you like it. Thank you for stopping by.
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