Sometimes I wish I was a bird, so I could fly high above the sky, touching peaks that I only dream of;
and perching on her balcony, so I could see her at my leisure,
the non answered calls and the ignored messages wouldnt be so much of a bother today.
For my eyes would be quenched from the thirst of her absence, to hear her solemn voice,
so sweet and gentle,
to admire her view as long as I desired.
Until darkness falls and she draws the curtains.
That’s how love works sometimes ..
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Image rights belong to JamaicaMai012 – DeviantArt
Beautifully Penned!
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Thank you
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Wow Sobia, this was eloquently written. You truly have a gift for prose. Glad I stumbled across your site. Looking forward to your future posts!
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Thank you so much, it’s always a pleasure to receive positive feedback especially, thank you for you’re kind feedback and I’m glad that you like it.
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Such beautiful words with a touch of sadness. 🙂 😦
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Thank you, it’s very much appreciated when such lovely feedback is left. Thank you.
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You’re utmost welcome. 🙂
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💐
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This is beautiful and a bit of heartbreak in there too.
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Thank you, it’s always a pleasure to know when you’re work is liked or appreciated. Thank you for you’re kind words.
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It is so good to get back here, Sobia and it is so good to see your poems. Such a love-ly poem
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I have often thought if I was. This was just beautiful
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Aawww thank you so much. I’m glad you like it. Thank you.
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This is gorgeous. At the end of every dark night, there is a brighter day.
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Thank you Philip for you’re kind comment. More so I’m glad you liked it.
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And thank you for sharing.
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Always a pleasure
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Loved it 😍
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Hello Sobia,
What a beautiful image and beautiful words that create the scene in my mind so well.
Thank you for such a profound post about Love 💐✨
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Thank you Di, it is always a pleasure to hear you’re kind and warm words complimenting the words I put together to aim to make sense of experiences and the world we reside in.
Thank you .
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Hello Sobia,
I’m so happy this comment made it through…
You’re very welcome. Yes, writing looks like it comes very easily to you putting your thoughts on ‘paper’ so to speak.
Beautiful. I may not keep up for a few weeks when life takes a different turn but don’t worry…I’ll keep you close…🙋🏻💐🦋
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Aaaww Deej, don’t worry about it, I know how busy life can get, just focus on what you need to do, and when you have the time and have settled in then feel free to the blogging world. Sometimes time slips by so fast that before we realise it, a month has gone by, all the best with moving Deej .
And thank you so much for you’re kindness, always appreciated.
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Such a beautiful reply, dear Sobia. Thank you so much, and I truly appreciate your support too. You are so kind.
Until soon,
Deej 🙋🏻💕
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Always a pleasure Di.
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You’re so lovely Sobia. Thank you for such kind replies…
💐🙋🏻
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It’s always a pleasure Deej
Thank you.
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How lovely to see you back on my feed with your beautiful words!
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Aaww how sweet of you, it always makes my day to come across such warm and kind comments. Thank you so much.
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It is a pleasure (always!)!
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“Until darkness falls and she draws the curtains”
But she’ll never draw them, so it seems that you’ll always be there 😉
A masterpiece Soby.. beautifully written 💝💜💝💜
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A masterpiece indeed dedicated to you.
جزاك الله خيرا Deej much humbled and awfully thankful to you for you’re love and kindness.
I’d like that very much, if you didn’t draw the curtains lol.
بارك الله فيك Deej and جزاك الله خيرا for being an amazing friend whom I love so dearly with all my heart.
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Mmmmmm, yes. Simply Yes. 😉 ❤
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Thank you Mr Professor, you’re acceptance is greatly appreciated. Thank you for your kind comments.
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Beautiful🌿
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Thank you ever so much cloud walker. You’re comments are much appreciated.
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Beautiful. I love it. I love the picture too. So good to see your posts. Miss you lots.
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Thank you ever so much Kath, always a pleasure to hear from you, and I’m glad you enjoyed this piece, thank you for you’re kind words.
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You’re welcome. 🙂 Smiling.
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Aaww Kath, how have you been and I hope you’re doing well and being you’re jolly self, do you know that’s quiet a rare quality to find in people nowadays, seeing the best in all situations.
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I’m good. I’m tired. I worked today. I am doing well. I’m going to be moving back home to help family for a while and I’m very excited to be moving. I’m also going to be starting a new job. I’m very excited about that. Thank you I appreciate that. It is hard to see the best in all situations. I try. How are you? Hope you are doing well.
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Aaww you found a job, that’s good to hear Kath and it’s nice to move in with family and rekindle some old memories and jolly good times.
I wish you all the best for you’re new job Kath.
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Thank you I appreciate that. I’m very excited. I’m very happy.
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That’s good to hear Kath.
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Thanks!
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A pleasure Kath.
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🙂 Smiling.
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Lovely
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Thank you so much.
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