The cool breeze swooned with calmness and settled after a moment, maybe realising I had mustered enough courage to come today, to finally speak to her; and the intervention every few seconds wasn’t helping, not today.
She still looked beautiful, as beautiful as the first day I had layed my eyes upon her. Her black silky hair which fell across her face sometimes due to the cool breeze, which she gently pushed back behind her ear. Her face still radiant like the sun, and her lips soft, smooth like a rose petal. I pulled my hand back not realising when or how I had started to caress them.
This wasn’t helping, I had to control myself.
I knew this wasn’t going to be easy, not after what I had done, my hand began to shake at the thought of it. I diverted my thoughts to avoid reminding myself & her which I was sure she still remembered. Who wouldn’t, I was surprised to see her still standing as her confident self after the ordeal, she appeared to be untouched by it all, which was very odd and strange to see. No woman would of been able to trust another man, especially not the one who made you endure it all.
I raised my eyes to meet hers, they still seemed to be the same; clear, content and happy. No sorrow, hardness or hate, just a calm blue sea at bay, at peace and flickered every now and then with the waves gently kissing the shore. They were full of hope, full of life; how did she do it; how! I had to break the silence before it drove me mad.
Bahrah; I.. I.. have wanted to meet you for quiet some time, well; for a very long time, and I ..
me too she whispered gently, me too.
Bahrah stood with the same demeanour, I hovered over to her eyes once again, the sea was still at bay, maybe she had moved on, or had forgiven me.
I broke the silence once again,
‘that’s so good to know, well; what I mean is; and what I’m trying to say is; I love you so much Bahrah, and I miss you so much.
Bahrah stood still, I prayed she wasn’t reminiscing over what had happened, what I had done to her, that night wasn’t going to leave my thoughts, not now, not ever and I was sure she wasn’t going to forget it easily too, especially with me in sight.
She gently smiled and took a step closer to me,
‘do you know Ahmed, I have waited for you, for a long time; for a very long time, for you to tell me that you love me, that you miss me. It’s been a while hasn’t it’
she took my hand and held it, then slowly moved back with hesitation. I returned the gesture and held hers. Her hands had turned a little cold, which wasn’t like her, she was always warm, her eyes remained the same, I ignored my thoughts and gave myself up; to her; she embraced me tightly as if she had missed me too as much as I missed her.
Bahrah smiled, a flicker of flame crossed her eyes, the serene sea was facing a little storm and it was only going to build overtime.
I closed my eyes, I conciled with my thoughts, allowing myself to rest for the first time in a while; oh it had been a long time, and I knew this meant one step closer; if only Ahmed knew what I had in mind for him.
‘I missed you Ahmad, I missed you so much’..
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Thank you for reading.
Sobia
Image taken from Pinterest.
-Bahrah is an Arabic word, it comes from Bahr which means sea and Bahrah is the feminine word of it, meaning sea.
This is the best post I have read in a while.. It just took me somewhere else😇😍😍
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Thank you ever so much dear and I’m glad you liked it. I am aiming to continue it but after my exams. My apologies for the late reply.
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Very evocative description here that takes one to the seaside. I will have this mind when I am next at the beach to spend some quiet moments with Bahrah. And what does Sobia mean? Thanks for liking one of my comments and thereby connecting me to your romantic world…
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Please correct to read ‘….to spend some quiet moments with…’. Typo error regretted…
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Done Sir.
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Sobia is a female name in Urdu and Arabic languages, meaning good and noble. Be that Sobia…
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Thank you Raja. I’ll surely try.
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Thank you ever so much Raja, hmm Sobia, I’ll have to get back to you that one.
Thank you so much for your kind feedback, it means slot to me.
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A beautifully written and intriguing piece of writing from you Sobia! As with all the other absolutely kind comments above… I’m awaiting to see what’s next too…
Lovely post.
Di 🙋💕
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Aaww thank you Di, I appreciate your lovely and kind feedback, a pleasure to have you here Di, thank you for stopping by.
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My pleasure Sobia. Thank you too for your ever gracious comments in reply 💕🦋
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Always a pleasure to see and hear from you Di.
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Thank you dear Sobia. As me with you… 🌟💐
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Always my pleasure Di.
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My pleasure dear as always.
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Very interesting dialogue!
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Thank you, appreciate you stopping by.
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I sense an undercurrent or revenge that his remorse fails to disguise.
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You sense very well, thank you dear Ellen for stopping by, always a pleasure to hear from you.
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I enjoy my vivits they are always interesting. Do pop over to my place again soon.
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Yes of course Ellen, I sure will.
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It is a captivating piece of writing. Its simply you 🙂
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Thank you ever so much dear, it is indeed a pleasure to hear from you.
Very much humbled by your kind words.
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It is always a pleasure to read something that is beautiful and pure. God bless 🙂
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Aaww that you dear, you’re ever so sweet and kind. Bless you.
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🙂 🙂
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Okay, you got me. I’m intrigued. When do I read part two?
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Aaww bless you, this coming week I’ll try to get part two up as soon as possible. Thank you dear.
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You’re most welcome and I am definitely on the lookout for part two!
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Aaww thank you, hopefully I’ll get it ready by the end of week dear.
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I want to tell you to take your time, but I can’t wait, so don’t take your time. 😛
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Aaww bless you, I’ll sure try to be quick as possible Hun.
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I’m only joking. Take your time. I’ll be waiting patiently. 🙂 Take care.
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Lol aaww very sweet of you. I’ll try to quicken the process but want to make sure it’s good or better than the first. But thank you so much, you surely motivate me dear. Very kind of you.
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🙂 🙂
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💐
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Ah it’s soothing! The sweetness of love. There are couple there, a few fellow bloggers who feel submerged into this blissfulness. 🙂 Loved it.
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Aaww thank you Sanket, always a place to hear your thoughts for I know you will say as it is, and it’s always welcome. Thank you Sanket.
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Always a pleasure.
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👍💐💐
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oh now that was a good way to start my return to reading here on wordpress! but then again I knew it would be!! ❤
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Aawww Maureen you’ve always been very generous with your words towards me.
Very much humbled especially it coming from you dear.
I’m touched and I am glad my post was able to bring you to a good start. Very much humbled my dear friend.
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And Sobia I will always be as long as I am here to read I will remain forever grateful! XO!
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Aaww Maureen, you’re such a sweet person, are you on Instagram by any chance?
I joined the insta world last night and would love to connect to my closest and most beautiful bloggers first foremost.
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Star Trek! Apologies. Revenge is a dish best served cold. Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd scene! 😀 (I knew it was chillier than I thought!)
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Well just wait on for the next part.
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Okie doke hopefully I end up close to here, and apologies for the catastrophes along the way, my friend 😀
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It’s totally okay Ben.
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Beautiful piece. I’ve missed you. Great to see you back posting again my sweet friend!!
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Aaww Kath, thank you so much dear, your one of the most sweetest person I know, especially in the blogging world, I’m always looking forward to hearing from you dear friend.
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You are so welcome. Thank you so much. I truly appreciate that. I look forward to hearing from you as well.
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Aaww sure will do dear and thank you once again.
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You’re welcome.
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💐💐
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Excellent! Just when I thought all was well the twist reared its head. Looking forward to the next part. I guess the storm is brewing. ☺☺
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Aaww thank you, I’m glad you saw the twist, and thank you so much. I am happy to see your feedback as you are quiet an expert with suspense and stories in general.
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You honor and humble me. All of your offerings are excellent. ☺☺
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Aaww a pleasure to know dear friend.
Thank you.
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Mmm, this was mesmerising
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Thank you Miriam, glad to hear it was.
There’s more to come.
Thank you for stopping by.
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Thank you on the twist I am wondering as well.
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I guess that’s something you may have to wait for in part two.
Thanks.
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Where do we end up? Me I am on another end of the spectrum. Over THERE
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Not sure if I meant my memories were sweet 😀
They weren’t 😀
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Yes it’s not the end just yet, there’s not to come.
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Hmm I guess, but you lost me there.
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Oh no……………not again. I am here and there and not everywhere
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Love went
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It does eventually
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Love went beyond sweet
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Yes very much so, however the story is sure to take a twist.
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Revenge is a dish best served cold. (that is Romulan right? I think)
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Haha it’s a saying revenge is sweet, I guess you could serve it hot or cold.
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Or not at all. Revenge does not feel good in any case. In a sense you could Become Vengence and live a spiralingly dark life. Going no where. Apologies! Unsure where……Not so unsure. There was a time I had spite in my heart. And I let it Go 😀
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Yes you’re right, I agree it isn’t, however sometimes people feel that’s how they can live by taking revenge for what they have made to suffered and in turn what they have become.
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Took me back to another place. I appreciate those moments, my gratitude
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Thank you Ben and I am glad it bought back memories.
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Sweet love..maybe they didn’t realize ” earlier the better”
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Maybe but I don’t think it sometimes ends up sweet, as they say revenge is sweet too.
Thank you for stopping by Akhila.
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Oh.. there was a revenge mode too..I see…
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Yes dear and that’s to come.
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