Remove thy mask, from the audience to your drama.
The sweet, bitter, brutal words you offer so loosely,
the bridge of trust you break, with no thought to the distances you create.
Loosen the charm from the public eye, they marvel at your attire, not knowing the inner side,
the confusion you extend to my shattered edged mind, and damaged bleeding soul,
the cuts, the bruises merged aside, go deeper than I mirror, deeper where my hidden voice resides.
Hover to the palpating organ, struggling to venture through my lifelines, it’s there; slowly fading, the love it once; held high.
Sobia
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing your words. X
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Thank you ever so much Ellie , I appreciate your beautiful feedback.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you
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wow. your lines are very powerful!
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Aaww thank you Rosema, so glad you think so.
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you’re welcome! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Well written. I enjoyed reading! 🙂
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Thank you so much dear, a pleasure to see you here and especially for your kind feedback.
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Well, I love your writing and I am always delighted whenever I see a post of yours appear in my reader.
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Aaww Thank k you ever so much dear, the feelings are mutual, I really appreciate your kind and sweet words.
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🙂
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Mesmerizing! I found this lovely piece energizing. Thank you.
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Thank you Roxie, so glad to hear you like it. Thank you for stopping by.
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Wonderfully written!
GOOD JOB!👍😂
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Thank you Shivee, very kind of you to say so. Welcome to my little place and thank you for visiting dear.
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Most welcome!💞❄
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💐👍
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This is gorgeous poeming. Your use of imagery leaves me in awe. I am so glad you found me and now I’ve found you.
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Thank you Lori, you’re ever so kind for leaving kind words of feedback. I’m glad too, thank you.
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My pleasure, hun 🙂
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👍🏼
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Lovely heartfelt words. 🙂
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Thank you Vashti, I’m glad you could connect to the emotions expressed in the post.
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Loved this poem. ❤ 🙂
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Thank you Idle Muser, I appreciate your kind feedback.
I’m glad you love it.
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🙂
Its title intrigued me to read it. 😉
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Aww that’s good to hear.
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How magnificent!!!
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Great one!
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Thank you, I appreciate your feedback.
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Every one of your words carries the weight of its meaning so gracefully! Beautiful!
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Thank you dear, I appreciate your kind feedback. Thank you for stopping by.
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A stunning and very beautiful poem, your words go deep!
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Thank you very much, your kind feedback is very much appreciated.
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My pleasure! I look forward to reading more…
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Haunting – it’s very good.
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Thank you Joanna 👍🏼
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Very deep and heartfelt.
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Thank you Eugenia
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Deep and thoughtful.
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Thank you.
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Welcome.
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Undoutebly awesome
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Thank you Neha 👍🏼
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I had to go liking all of the comments. They’ve all said it better than I could. Keep on writing it out!!
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Thank you ever so much Shattered for him, my sincere apologies, I’m not sure how I missed our lovely comment, I was casually browsing through this post, and discovered I haven’t responded to your comment. My sincere apologies.
Thank you once again for visiting and leaving feedback .
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No worries! 🙂 I notice I miss a lot of comments myself! Merry Christmas!
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Thank you, very kind f you.
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Beautifully penned! 💕💎
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Thank you Sundershana, I appreciate your feedback.
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My pleasure
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Amazing 👌👌👍
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Thank you Silent Spectator, I appreciate your feedback.
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Mon Plaisir😇
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I really liked this piece, particularly:
“the bridge of trust you break, with no thought to the distances you create” Write On!
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Thank you Rob, I appreciate your time and feedback.
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Beautifully painful.
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Thank you Mona.
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Beautifully written. I could feel the pain that is evoked from the words. May Allah protect us and heal us from broken relationships.
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Thank you sis, appreciate the feedback and yes that is what was aimed.
Aameen
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beautifully written…
It has a very deep meaning to contemplate about!
None can ever mend the bridge of trust once broken!.
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Thank you sis for your kind feedback. Yes I Agee. It is painful too to lose that relationship too.
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Nicely written!
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Thank you Suv.
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. . . The stage is yours.
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Thank you O’Shine, I appreciate the feedback.
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. . . I salute.
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Lovely
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Thank you Martian.
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So beautifully written with an apt picture too. 👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Thank you boundless blessings for your kind feedback. It is very much appreciated.
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Thanks for your beautiful comments and my name is Kamal and what is your name so that we can both be little informal.
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Wow, I really like this poem!!
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Thank you Adriana, your comments and feedback are always appreciated.
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I can empathise with this, having experience of both hiding behind and revealing masks.
It is a pleasure to read your words as well!
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Thank you Diana, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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Amazing.
And when the true face is revealed, it is immensely painful.
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It sure is, sometimes it seems like it’s difficult for some people to just be nice.
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Yeah, that too. 😐
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Beautiful!! Loved what you have written …
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Thank you Sugar Satchet, I appreciate the feedback. Thank you for visiting my blog.
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Your blog is one amazing destination on wordpress. Love every bit of it. Keep flowing
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Thank you Sugar, I’m humbled by your kind feedback.
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Excellent Sobia. You can feel this exchange being played out on stage.
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Thank you Davy, I appreciate the feedback.
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Enjoyed the indirect reference to heart.
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Thank you, appreciate the feedback.
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😌 loved it !! Many a times people show a face that isn’t their real one.
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Thank you Zinni, and also many a times it’s those you love that show a different face which is beyond understanding.
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True. 😌
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you Prajakta, appreciate your feedback.
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
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Thank you 👍🏼
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Amazing
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Thank you.
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its amazing (:
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Thank you let’s find peace, appreciate the feedback.
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Amazingly written post. Really glad I checked out your blog😉
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Thank you Bilingual Vegetable, I appreciate your kind feedback. 👍🏼
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“Hover to the palpating organ, struggling to venture through my lifelines, it’s there; slowly fading, the love it once; held high.”
Wow, that was some powerful poetry! Love your work.
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Thank you Noora, appreciate the kind feedback. Motivational.
Thank you.
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Truly my pleasure!
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Beautiful words. Memorable Title.
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Thank you Joel.
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You’re welcome simply me.
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Love ❤️ this!!!!! Great read for the AM 🙃
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Thank you Lokorokosabi, appreciate your kind feedback.
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😁
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Poignant and powerful! Great piece!
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Thank you Andrei for the feedback
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You’re welcome!
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this took my breath away….
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving feedback, always a pleasure to hear from you.
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So well written!
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Thank you
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