There was silence, complete silence, a stillness in her voice, lost in her thoughts and lost in a world of her own. She had seem to set a resolve, like a companionship so deep which often confused me.
She spoke after a great deal of debate within her mind, fighting the odds and whether to maintain her silence.
‘Silence is a friend of those who listen with attentiveness of what it brings and what it offers to share, try it you may be left at wonders’.
She then left, leaving the silence as my companion so I may reminisce and marvel at its wonders that she had already achieved.
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Your writing is beautiful
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Thank you Miriam, I appreciate your feedback. Thank you ever so much.
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You’re most welcome.
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This was an amazing interpretation of silence! Loved it! 😏👌
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Aaww thank you, I’m glad to hear that you loved it dear. A pleasure to hear from you as always.
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The power of silence, well expressed, Sobia!
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Thank you ever so much dear, always a pleasure to have you here .
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good Woman’s Day…
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Oh Sobia truly I love this piece so much…dreamlike beautiful and such truth to your words just lovely ❤
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Thank you Maureen, your comments and lovely words always make my day.
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That is just like you to say Sobia just so thoughtful! ❤
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Thank you Maureen, just like you my dear.
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you dear.
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Loved the topic of this poem and your painting of silence! Loved these lines – “‘Silence is a friend of those who listen with attentiveness of what it brings and what it offers to share, try it you may be left at wonders’.”
I love the truth of those lines. It’s the way I catch words and phrases – ambush them in the silence and darkness!
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Aaw thank you ever so much, I agree sometimes just allowing the mind to wonder at destinations beyond reach can make you reach heights you may have never imagined.
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I think silence is under rated and you have shown why!!
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Thank you so much dear, it is talking is often displayed as being confident and well spoken sometimes, whilst silence is often said to us is of a person who is either anti sociable or shy and not confident. I don’t believe it is the case.
Thank you dear
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You are more than welcome. It is great to meet another “Lover of the Silence” (oh, I like that)! You are right on about silence. Silence is not properly appreciated, except by those who are wise!
Have a great day!
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I agree dear, and thank you, I hope you are having a lovely day too.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you ever so much dear. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
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You’re so welcome. I’m glad to see your posts again.
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Aaww it’s always wonderful to hear from you. You’re such a sweetheart. 💐💐
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Thank you. You are so sweet.
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My pleasure and you are too Kath.
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Thank you.
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My pleasure dear
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Beautiful lines, so calm..
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Thank you Andrei, I’m glad you like it and thank you for stopping by.
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My pleasure, Sobia ☺
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You command words to follow your feelings. 🙂
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Thank you Sanket, so kind of you to stop by and leave your lovely comments. It’s appreciated. 👍🏼
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Pleasure 🙂
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As your post intimates, so many people are afraid of silence. There is a tendency to think that one must always be the life and soul of the party, always laughing and joking. Many people fear the silence for noise blocks out thought and enables individuals to avoid pondering on the profound things in life. Great post. Kevin
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Than you Kevin, I thoroughly enjoy reading your posts as well as your thought provoking comments. Much appreciated.
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Beautifully written. 😊
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Thank you
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oh wow. like how you write with gripping simplicity. ❤
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Thank you Rosema, appreciate the feedback. Thank you
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you’re welcome!
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Simple and powerful. I like, it … Good luck with your future writing.
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Thank you Mike, for you’re feedback, it’s greatly appreciated.
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Lovely read
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Thank you
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Lovely post. Thank you!
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Thank you for reading Ngobesing
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