She listened attentively, holding back the storm that was brewing within.
A tear forcing its way down and landing with a splash upon the palm of her hand.
He froze upon witnessing her ordeal, silence embraced them, unwelcoming their next exchange of words.
She made her way to the door, to free herself from the pain, grasping the door handle with all her might, searching for strength to speak. she then turned to face him, without allowing herself to fail or become weak.
She broke the cold silence, leaving him with her last words to reminisce over;
‘I should leave rather than allow myself to be broken slowly, it’s the best thing to do, for me, and I suppose for you too.
Goodbye’.
The door closed with a thud, he stood still, trying to embrace what just occurred, he had lost; he had lost her, he had lost all.
‘You never really understood me.
I still love you, I really do’ he whispered.
He stared at the door, wanting her to return.
He fell; the floor was cold, the air around him began to change, his eyes closing slowly, everything disappearing from sight; leaving him in complete silence and in complete darkness. . .
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Image: Pinterest, can’t seem to find the owner behind it.
Deep and emotional. 👍🏼
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Thank you Puneet, you’re very kind with your compliments.
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Welcome. I give honest appreciation where it’s due. 😊
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That’s wonderful to hear Puneet. We think alike. 👍🏼
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Why is it always too late that people realize what they could and do lose. So sad for him but I am glad she got out.
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Yes very true, sometimes we just don’t see it happening.
Thank you for stopping by.
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Amazing post! Loved it, looking forward for more!! 💕
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Thank you, very kind of you to stop by. I’m glad you like it.
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Made me cry 💔
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I’m speechless. I didn’t ever think my penning would make anyone cry. Thank you for sharing how you felt, it isn’t easy to do that sometimes. A great pleasure to have you here dear.
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It was intresting.Like a dream.
I was feeling so sad,and there your linnes get out of me that sadness.I could see that girl,i felt hers sadness.
Write more please ❤
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Thank you dear, I’m humbled by your kind words and the way my writings make you feel.
Thank you ever so much.
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I would like to read an novel that you wrote❤
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Aaww Thank you dear, you are very motivating and kind with your words.
Yes I’m in the process of putting it together, presently I’m working on my poetry compilation to be published.
Thank you ever so much.
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Thank you ❤
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Always a pleasure to have you here.
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On the end i felt like i dream it.
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Sometimes writing away allows me to reminisce away from reality and pen away.
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Love the interactions in both of these poems. Vulnerable strength in time of need!
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Thank you Roth for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. 👍🏼
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You are welcome! You can call me Dwight! (<:
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Dwight, a very unique name, thank you.
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Thanks
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👍🏼
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Sublime, to not finish, to leave the reader chomping for more is a powerful position to leave it in. Excellently placed p…rose x😇
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Thank you Ellen, your comments are truly a delight and a great encouragement to write on.
Yes I must agree, it is an ideal way to leave fellow readers a little thirsty.
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We are drawn in as if in a dream and when the door closes, we can feel the bite of his anguish…a beautiful piece, I’m glad I stopped by!
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Thank you for your lovely and warm comments. I’m glad you were drawn in and like the piece. Thank you for stopping by.
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It’s always a pleasure…
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Beautifully written and heartwrenching
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, I’m happy to hear that you like it. Your comment is greatly appreciated.
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Loved your writing..
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Thank you so much for dropping by and leaving your lovely comments.
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nicely narrated
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Thank you Davesh, your feedback is greatly appreciated.
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🙂
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Oh so sad… but well written!
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Thank you Christy for your lovely feedback.
Yes heartbreaks are painful and that’s sometimes related in stories or poems, as no all endings are happy unfortunately.
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Very beautifully carved all the emotions. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you Sundershana, I greatly appreciate your feedback. I’m glad you were able to connect to it emotionally.
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Beautiful and touched a chord! 🙂
Thanks for liking my posts and your blog is amazing! 😀
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Aaww Thank you for dropping by, and for your kind comments.
It is greatly appreciated.
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Very compelling post. I love the way your write. Please continue to share your talents with us. ^__^
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Aaww Thank you, I appreciate your kind words and support.
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My pleasure.
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👍🏼
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Beautiful and well done.
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Thank you Eugenia, I’m glad that you like it. Thank you for your feedback.
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😉
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That was so beautiful💜..Filled up with emotions..😊
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Thank you Mayank for your lovely comments, it’s grateful appreciated.
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Amazingly written! Waiting for What’s Next…
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Thank you Sara, I appreciate your feedback.
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oh wow. this is emotive. well-written!
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Aaww Thank you Rosema for your kind feedback.
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you’re welcome dear. ❤
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👍🏼
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Your words are well expressed – but content was quite sad. 😟
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Thank you Prior, I appreciate your time and kind feedback. Thank you for visiting.
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😉
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Amazing post 🙂 Loved it 🙂
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Thank you Prajakta, I’m happy to hear that you loved it.
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Amazing write 😊
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Thank You Samantha, very kind of you to leave me feedback.
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So sad. But when a door closes, another one opens. For both. 🙂
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Indeed. Love the positivity 👍🏼
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Great writing : ) i cant wait to read more.
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Thank you Dom, appreciate your feedback and support.
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Wow! Looking forward to the next part?
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Lol hmm I’ll have to write one especially for you my dearest. Haha.
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Heartfelt!! ❤
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Thank you Deepika, I’m happy to hear it was.
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My pleasure!! 🙂 🙂
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👍🏼
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