All glooms around me, I stand to reminisce our last fatal moment.
The feel of your touch, which awoke sensations never before touched, the taste of your words, the freshness of your breath still lingers; the sweet sound of you’re voice still echoes. I stand alone, recalling what now is lost. Even the lifeless around me know. They understand as they have began to decay and refuse to flourish as they once did. They mock me or pity me. I refuse to acknowledge them, for the storm within me erupts like a volcano gushing forth its pain and anger with all its might to destroy everything within its reach. The pain builds and subsides at its leisure beyond my control.
Pain is a futile word to describe my loss. My heart mourns, it weeps due to being distant from you. It knows to only function in one way; and that is …
being with you.
Image courtesy: Rachael C Marek – Prompt
This is really touching. Very emotional. Well done!
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Thank you very much
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Wow!!..Beautiful..Emotional💛
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Thank you Mayan, I’m glad you like it and was able to connect to it.
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All of your work is just so beautiful. Never stop sharing your beautiful words.
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Just a beautiful piece, I can feel the emotions oozing out of it. Loved it!
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Thank you, I am glad you can connect to it and are able to feel what I was aiming to convey. Thank you for dropping by.
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Girl,you are simply astonishing
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Thank you Neha, you’re very kind.
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Wow, I got goosebumps over this. Such powerful emotion in this.
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Love so deep….powerful!
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Thank you Menaakshi. I appreciate the feedback.
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a lovely, haunting little write. I particularly enjoyed:
“Even the lifeless around me know” elicits just how profound your loss is. Write On!
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Thank you Rob, I sincerely appreciate you taking your time to read and fed ack on my posts.
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Great post. I love the emotion in the post.
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Thank you, I greatly appreciate your feedback, I’m happy to know you loved it.
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I sure did. 😊
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Thank you 👍🏼
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Very inspiring and a nice write up.
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Thank you boundless, I’m glad you liked it.
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Great poem in reflections of a lost love.. and all the emotions are hurting you are left with..
Just remember.. don’t cry 😭 because it’s over…
smile 😁 .. because it/he happens…
The intensity of your hurt 😭 is measured by the intensity of your love ❤️ or passionate emotions….
Sometimes it’s the best hurt there is
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Thank you.
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The words and the image tie together so well – lovely work
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Thank you so much for you’re feedback, it’s greatly appreciated.
I was trying to access your blog but can’t seem to do so. Could you please share the link. Thank you.
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Lovely work indeed
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Thank you exotic, your feedback is much appreciated
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You are so welcome my friend…
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👍🏼 a pleasure to hear from fellow bloggers.
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Well written, the emotion is palpable
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Thank you Covert, I appreciate the feedback.
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You’ll find I’m pretty honest, I tell it like it is.
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I appreciate it and that’s what we need, more people like you who are honest, as it’s the best way and that’s how we learn too.
Thank you covert.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you Joel for visiting and leaving feedback, greatly appreciated.
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You’re welcome Sobia.
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Great writing here. Poignant; amazing. Bravo!
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Thank you Ngobesing. Appreciate you’re feedback.
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poignant and beautiful, my dear. i do so love your scribbles… xo
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Aaww Thank you, I greatly appreciate you’re kind feedback. 👍🏼
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beautifully painful piece! 🙂 ❤ great job.
P.S.
You might mean "your" instead of "you're" here: The feel of you’re touch.
🙂
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Thank you Rosema.
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always! ❤
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You are an incredible writer yourself. Amazing
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Thank you meemfay, appreciate the feedback.
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Very interesting!
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Thank you
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Nominated you for the versatile blogger award! Hope you accept my nomination.. 🙂
https://teenmemoir.com/2016/10/16/the-versatile-blogger-award/
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Thank you for nominating me, very kind of you and much appreciated.
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Ur welcome 😊
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This is absolutely lovely! Thank you so much for taking part in my writing prompt challenge! I look forward to seeing what else you create!
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Nice writeup
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Thank you Talkaholic, greatly appreciate feedback from you.
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This was truly wonderful! I was kept interested to the end! You are a great writer.
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Thank Artful, I truly appreciate you’re feedback, for you write very well yourself. Thank you.
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You are welcome!!! Keep up the good work!!! 🙂
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Thank you Artful, I will do 👍🏼
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Second it
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wow this is so beautiful full of emotion.
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Thank you Asma.
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